91 Banana road Fruit valley
0000
13.3.18
Dear mum and dad,
There were lots of people saying GO GO!l
Are you getting excited yet mum and dad? I cod feel a hot dog burning in my mouth. I could smelI
muddy grass. I was holding a rugby ball. It was bumpy. I could see 2 goals and they were massive. I heard a rugby ball go BANG!.
My team mates were saying here, here, here so they could get the ball.
From,
Karsin
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Reflection: We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed I enjoyed using expression.
Something I found tricky was spelling.
Next I will try to use a dictionary on my own.
Karsin
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Reflection: We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed I enjoyed using expression.
Something I found tricky was spelling.
Next I will try to use a dictionary on my own.
1 comment:
A good effort with using your senses to help you describe! Keep trying to proofread your sentences carefully.
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