Thursday, March 15, 2018

Mystery letter

    
  91 Banana road                                                                                                                                           Fruit valley
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 13.3.18

Dear mum and  dad,
                                                                                 
There were lots of people saying GO GO!l

Are you getting excited yet mum and dad? I cod feel a hot dog burning in my mouth. I could smelI
muddy grass. I was holding a rugby ball. It was bumpy. I could see 2 goals and they were massive. I heard a rugby ball go BANG!.

My team mates were saying here, here, here so they could get the ball.

From,
Karsin
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Reflection: We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed I enjoyed using expression.
Something I found tricky was spelling.
Next I will try to use a dictionary on my own.

1 comment:

Mrs N said...

A good effort with using your senses to help you describe! Keep trying to proofread your sentences carefully.