Writing Term 3

Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

• add some detail to my writing
• choose words to make my writing more interesting

We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.

"I liked watching the performance in the auditorium.  I liked it when the man banged the drum.  I liked writing about it.  It's tricky to write hard words in the sentences but I try hard."

Karsin